double page spread feedback

i have showed my double page spread to a focus group and this is the feedback that i have got from them to help me improve it.

• writing is too small
• its very professional looking and links nicely with the front cover
• font size could be bigger, but it looks very good and the images are nice
• good layout, but again, the writing is too small
• boring font
• the layout and colours are good
• the writing is too small, but has a very good layout and i like the expanded quote
• lots of spelling mistakes

double page spread first draft

this is the first draft of my double page spread, i have tried to make it match my front cover and make it appeal to my target audiance.

focus group on music front cover!

i have showed my first draft of my front cover to a focus group and these are the things that they have come up with to help me appeal better to my target audiance

• it's a bit too dark
• it's a good picture and masthead
• the yellow stands out alot
• the band names are in the same colour.

more research on double page spreads

double page spread research

music magazine - first draft

this is the first draft of my music magazine called "output". i have tried to make it appeal to my target audiance by using different fonts and colours. this is just an all round music magazine as it cover all types of music genres.

pictures for magazine

these are the 4 pictures that i have selected for my music magazine, these will go on the front cover, contents page and double page spread.