double page spread feedback

i have showed my double page spread to a focus group and this is the feedback that i have got from them to help me improve it.

• writing is too small
• its very professional looking and links nicely with the front cover
• font size could be bigger, but it looks very good and the images are nice
• good layout, but again, the writing is too small
• boring font
• the layout and colours are good
• the writing is too small, but has a very good layout and i like the expanded quote
• lots of spelling mistakes

double page spread first draft

this is the first draft of my double page spread, i have tried to make it match my front cover and make it appeal to my target audiance.

focus group on music front cover!

i have showed my first draft of my front cover to a focus group and these are the things that they have come up with to help me appeal better to my target audiance

• it's a bit too dark
• it's a good picture and masthead
• the yellow stands out alot
• the band names are in the same colour.