Wednesday, 17 March 2010

double page spread feedback

i have showed my double page spread to a focus group and this is the feedback that i have got from them to help me improve it.


  • writing is too small
  • its very professional looking and links nicely with the front cover
  • font size could be bigger, but it looks very good and the images are nice
  • good layout, but again, the writing is too small
  • boring font
  • the layout and colours are good
  • the writing is too small, but has a very good layout and i like the expanded quote
  • lots of spelling mistakes

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